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Please comment on my 2nd fantasy story?

Saturday, March 6th, 2010

Lilka ran.
Birds cried.
Some ways ahead, she glimpsed a wooly gray cloak swish out of sight beyond a hill…Stanislaw. Her dark eyes widened in recognition.
“Stanislaw!” she chirruped. “Wait for me, my lamb! My wizard!”
The wind kissed her bonny face, tangled her skirts. She cried out in laughter and swept her arms about like pinwheels. Glitter shot from her fingertips, dusting the sky in cottony pink. Her heart drummed fast and sharp. Despite, her heart was light with an unexpected joy.
Springtime rushed past in its vivid blur. The sun bathed her face in heat, made her inky locks shine rosily. Daffodils and poppies carpeted the grass under her bare feet. She danced among them like a flower herself, all springy and glowing. Shade from the surrounding maple trees dappled everything spotty. Magenta Prairie was stunning.
She flew down the hillock, chasing that silver cloak. But alas! Stanislaw was not to be found. Where was he? She pondered it for a second. He had to be close by, perhaps behind a tree. Or mayhap he had magicked himself invisible! She sprinted faster in fervent pursuit, so fast that the world disappeared. Pale sapphire was the sky. Red and yellow specks blistered under her eager feet.
“Lilka!” It was his voice!
“Are you there?”
Lilka came to a jittery stop, dizzy. Her legs felt like jelly. Sweat dampened her neck. One thing she knew for certain: she had run forever. Forever constituted…eighteen long and desolate years? Yes, she was eighteen. How had time slid past her so slyly? Ten years ago seemed nonexistent, even five…thirteen was none so complicated as eighteen, especially for a woman. Then the world lurched, rotated…looked gauzelike….
“I’m right here! Open your eyes, fool-lady!” It was her sweetheart again, talking to her from nowhere.
“Where are you?” she yelled breathlessly, getting more frustrated by the second.
But there was no time to be angry. The world was spinning too fast, spiraling into nothingness. Her heart had stopped beating so fiercely. In fact, now it hardly beat at all. She felt made of wood. Each eyelid weighed millions. She couldn’t lift them, couldn’t lift this nightmarish daze. Fear and trepidation goggled through her veins, gripped her with their vise-like hands.
Then, suddenly, the soles of her feet collided into something waxy and velvety. Had she been flying? She certainly hadn’t felt anything solid under her feet since everything sped up so wild.
Lilka gazed. Far and wide, a sea of blooms scoured the land: ruby-petaled poppy bulbs and sunny, bold daffodils. They shimmered beautifully. Next, her head dropped and she gazed no more. Black hair pushed itself around her face. It had lost its auburn sheen.
In truth, the entire of Magenta Prairie had lost its luster. Clusters of maple trees, once so green and verdant, faded to a chalky stain. Pastel powder piled up on the brittle branches. The perfectly blue sky fell away to rows of milky haze. This fog dispersed itself doggedly, fluttering like a disease, infectious among the lovely blossoms. Lilka could no longer see the cheerful red and yellow heads. She no longer heard the shrieks of birdsong; no longer saw the glorious golden sun. It nearly broke her heart, seeing the fairytale land crumble.
In all this uproar of nature, she had squeezed her eyes shut. Cool scuttled across her face, danced upon her eyelashes and froze them. The temperature dropped severely. White flakes wheeled from the heavens, zigzagging in the still air.
“No, my fairy story…you don’t exist, don’t survive,” she told herself, with eyes still screwed shut. “Nothing’s here, I’m not really here either.”
Even life, capricious though it was, couldn’t play such an imaginary trick as this.
Lilka opened her frozen eyes. Her bare feet were dusted in a fine layer of snow. Yet they were not cold, not even wet.
“Lilka, what’s the matter…?” a blurry voice cried out, shocking in its concern. It whispered, “Awaken.”
Then she closed her eyes again. A shiver raced up her body.
The voice said, “Snow is harmless for the most part, anyways.”
***
When Lilka did at last awaken, it was to the horrid sound of scraping. Digging…the iron clunk of a shovel.
“What’s going on?” she said, her words jumbled like potpourri.
She was cold, freezing cold. Goosebumps pricked their way up her arms and legs. All around was the blinding white glow of snow. Above stretched a black cobweb of tree branches. They were blanketed in sleeves of snow. For a confused second, she wondered if she was still dreaming.
“No, I’m awake,” she told herself resolutely.
“Ah yes, you are,” a voice said.
Lilka pushed herself up on her elbows. She wore a snowy white robe. The sleeves were lace-edged and billowy. Gently, she brushed her fingers across the fabric. It was dry…dry and stiff. However, underneath, she wore a thick black gown. Its woolen material had soaked up much of the melting snow, and thus was slightly damp.
“Who s-said that?” she swept h
“Who s-said that?” she swept her frost-dusted hair off her shoulders and gazed about for who had spoken. When she didn’t see him immediately, she whispered, “Stanislaw?”
“Miss, I’m not Stanislaw and I’ve no idea what’s going on,” he spoke again.
Still he remained invisible.
Now a little bothered by this whole act, she scrambled to her feet and flapped her robe and gown to rid them of powder. “Show yourself! I know you’re there…this is no dream!”
To her great surprise, a man stepped from behind a knotted bush….
Lilka nearly jumped from her skin and bones. It was awful. It was awful the way he looked at her, the way his cold eyes drilled into hers, awful the way he sauntered towards her catlike. Long black hair fell over his face to shroud his eyes silent. However, the way he walked was still horrid. It was slow and menacing, predatory and stalking.
“What do you want, M-mister?” she cried. “I beg of you, don’t hurt me!”
“Aye, don’ hur’ the girl, Atanazy…” A woman’s voice this time
“Aye, don’ hur’ the girl, Atanazy…” A woman’s voice this time…
Lilka leapt into the air in a strange, wild fright. She nearly stumbled and her eyes kept darting about madly. This was a nightmare…she must still be asleep. After all, was she being cornered? Did this sinister man before her have companions just as wicked?
“Y-yes,” she stammered in a soft voice, “I’m a-asleep, it’s only a nightmare, only a….”
Then everything happened so unbelievably fast that Lilka could hardly keep up with it all. The dark-haired one, with a twisted smile afflicting his face, kept sauntering towards her. His fleecy black boots cut deep circles in the frost. The velvet cloak he wore—it was pine green, not gray—slipped across the snow, bobbing behind him.
But that was not the fast part….
Someone burst from a snow pile in an explosion of white powder. With skinny, gloved fingers outstretched and blonde hair unruly, she rushed at the man like a killer.
“You better stop!” she screamed. “You demon!”
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With that, she leapt on top of him and pulled them both to the ground. Buried deep in the snow, Lilka had a hard time seeing anything. She was nearly frozen with shock. What on earth was going on?
Snow and fleece and dark hair flew like fabric in a sewing mill. Lilka saw only seconds of the fury: the blonde lady’s face, marred by her seething expression…the man’s scowl, sharp white teeth and red mouth…torn emerald velvet….
The blonde lady, noticeably exasperated, stopped suddenly. Pinned helplessly into the drifts of snow, the man had not a chance. She had a gloved hand pressed around his forearm, the other clapped over his mouth, and her knees on top of his thighs. A fiendish grin slit her face and she pulled something glittery from a pocket. Lilka strained to see, for she had taken several steps backward in alarm. Was that a knife? Whatever the object was, the man clearly grew very frightened. His distressed mumbles and violent movements choked up Lilka’s senses. She bit her lip in
She bit her lip in sorrow, torn between two sides. Dark tears welled in her big eyes.
Gripping it tight, the lady drew back the shiny thing and, with a terrible slowness, plunged it forward. Lilka pinched her eyes together and wrung her hands, hopping in circles and feeling sick.
“Aha! Victory for me!” came the woman’s shrill cry. “You girl! Come here and see! Come to reap the wonders of a victory well met!”
But Lilka had started to cry. She submerged her face in the dry white lace of her robe. She stared into the soft darkness. Hot tears surged in her eyes. They met her tongue and tasted salty. Her face felt tense, her emotions prickly.
“Why?” she sobbed thickly. “Why? Why?”
Quiet, tentative footsteps penetrated her lacy shelter. Lilka smelled something metallic…and beyond that, something mild and sweet. However, she only wept harder. She wept loudly and recklessly.

Help me with my short story? ideas to end it?

Saturday, March 6th, 2010

Hi, i’m writing a fairy tale but I can’t think of how to finish the story? Any ideas for a nice happy ending? :D

Once upon a time, there was a beautiful kingdom called Glissando, and in this kingdom was a castle where lived a King and Queen and their three daughters, Celesta, Cappella and Aria. Aria was said to be the most beautiful girl in any of the kingdoms in the country. She had hair as bright as the sun and eyes as deep as the ocean and skin as that shimmered like the moon. But Aria had a terrible curse put on her at birth. The treacherous witch, Sforzando, stole Aria’s voice. Many years ago Sforzando had been very much in love with the King. When he married his queen Sforzando was enraged with jealousy. It had been said that the King had fallen in love with queen Gavotte the moment he heard her voice. In revenge she made sure that Aria had never spoken a word in her life and she never would unless the curse was broken. In order to break the curse Aria must find true love. For someone blessed with Aria’s beauty, this task doesn’t sound very difficult. But true love must come from the inside, what’s on the outside can play no part. How would anyone be able to truly love Aria when she could not speak. How could anyone get to know Aria on the inside when she has no voice to let anyone in?

The King and Queen were devastated that their child was unable to speak. Celesta and Cappella hadn’t inherited their mother’s beautiful voice so they had hoped that Aria would.

As Aria grew up she learned to cope with her muteness rather well. She was not bitter about it and wasted no time feeling sorry for herself. She had found another way to express herself – music. From an early age Aria had always been enchanted by music and had been delighted when she received a piano for her sixth birthday. She immediately connected with it. At such ease she could play virtuosic sonatas and she often composed many of her own works.

It was on the first day of spring that Aria’s sixteenth birthday arrived and all of Glissando prepared to celebrate it. The two older princesses had long ago married and moved away to far away kingdoms. Aria was excited about seeing her sisters again but she dreaded the party. She hated meeting crowds of people, she found it hard to cope with people other than her close family. Every prince in the country was to attend the grand ball that very night in the hope of winning her hand in marriage. This was in incredibly daunting idea for poor Aria. She knew that most people didn’t see beyond her beauty. No one really knew her. She doubted that of the hundreds of princes arriving at the castle one would be her prince charming.

So, the princes came, arriving in ships and in golden carriages, and riding atop beautiful horses. Each of them was as handsome and each bore a magnificent gift for Aria for even in the furthest kingdom they had heard of the Princess, and her legendary beauty.
Aria, in the meantime, was watching the travellers arrive from a high balcony in her chambers, she felt sick with nerves. She had never seen so many people in the one place! She was just about to retreat to her piano when, quite suddenly, her eyes fell upon a young man standing a little way apart from the milling crowd of royalty, like a bright ray of sunlight peeking out from behind dark storm clouds.
She sat up on her couch and leaned forward for a better look, gaping at him with her mouth hanging open in a very un-princess-like manner. If Aria was the sun, with her bright gold hair and summer-blue eyes, then this tall young man was surely the moon. He was dressed all in gray velvet and pale golden silk of the finest cut. His long, blond hair was so pale that it looked almost silver, exactly the color of moonlight. His eyes were like midnight, a deep purple-black that faintly glimmered with starlight, and when he suddenly turned them upon Aria, she saw great wisdom in their depths, and a soul so beautiful that it brought an ache to her throat to look into them.
When the princess finally looked back again, she saw that the prince had vanished. She searched the crowd for him, but he was nowhere to be found. Impatient to find out more about him, Aria bravely ventured down the stairs and approached the hall. As she entered she was overwhelmed at the amount of people crammed in. It didn’t take long for her to spot him, he stood out like a star at night Aria was transfixed, she was lost in his eyes. Suddenly she noticed his gaze change. It was now directed at her! Aria panicked as he approached her. She had to get away. She knew it was rude but she just couldn’t bring herself to stay there. In an instant she had left the room and was on her way to her piano.
She breathed out as she touched the keys. Sometimes she felt like the piano was her only true friend. The only one she could confide in. The only one who understood her.
Meanwhile Prince Rubato was very puzzled at Aria’s sudden exit. He was very concerned a
at the frightened look she had had on her face. He left the room in search of her. As he ascended the stairs he heard the most delightful music.
Rubato followed the noise to the room. It was hauntingly beautiful. Enchanted by the music he silently approached the door. His hand quivered as he pushed it ajar. He was amazed at her beauty. She was just as breathtaking as the music she played. He gazed in awe as her finger danced gracefully over the keys, as if she was barely touching them a tall. A soft smile played about her lips, as if for one moment she was truly happy. As the melody reached the climax he watched her shoulders shake at the expenditure of emotion. Lost in the music, she hadn’t noticed his presence.

Anyone know this story?

Friday, March 5th, 2010

I read a book a long time ago about a teenage girl whose grandmother was a fairy midwife. She gets accused of being a witch by two sisters in the village, the girls are acting possessed, and in the very end she’s supposed to be hanged but a Prince she saved earlier comes and releases her.

At another part in the story she’s supposed to cut a fairy’s umbilici cord with an ice pick but she has to use her teeth. (Or something.)

I read this story like 4 years ago so I’m sorry but I can’t remember any more details. Just wondering if anyone happeneded to remeber the name…

How do you like my story plot? help last bit?

Monday, February 22nd, 2010

ok. here goes, i hope you like it.

Ella moves from the city to the coast, and she finds the coast very relaxing and she strangely feels at home. she lives a normal life with her mum,(who looks nothing like her) and her dad died before she was born.
she goes to school and she and her new friend Evelyn find a sort of beautiful garden which has 3 ponds with water statues, a mermaid, a fairy and a witch. all are very beautiful…but the only one tht works was the mermaid.
they sort of get sucked in and it turns out to be the entrance to the mer land, and from the mer land you enter into the fairy land, and from the fairy land you enter into the wizarding land.
Ella finds out she was the daughter of a half mer half fairy lady, and a full wizard man. so shes all three races, fairy mer and witch. shes the only one in the whole world to be like this, so she immediately is wanted by the wizarding world, fairy world and mer world.
But, the wizarding world stopped communicating with the fairies a long time ago. there was a prophecy, tht when a 3 raced child is born, all three races will unite and be happy….
how can i make all three races have a war over Ella? should i change anything….what should the conflict be? the climax? helpp i have writers block
umm ok theres more, sorry you have to read so much.

Ellas mum had a relationship with a wizard (a hot one too) and the fairies hated it… would be shocked to see ellas mum with a baby.

so she took a potion to be a human for 2 hours and left the mer world and dropped the baby off at a ladies house.

im planning to reveal there identity after the peace comes back between the 3 races so ella can be with her parents happily again. ot should they be dead?

i want ella to live mainly in the fairy land.
ok then no war….but then what complication? i mean i dont want her to turn stuck up…no way thts not her personality. um…im really stuck. um…k maybe ill make her stuck up……and then make her realise tht shes not all tht, and then come back to her shy, kind uniqe personality.

Story plot? ratings please, help with last bit?

Saturday, February 20th, 2010

ok. here goes, i hope you like it.

Ella moves from the city to the coast, and she finds the coast very relaxing and she strangely feels at home. she lives a normal life with her mum,(who looks nothing like her) and her dad died before she was born.
she goes to school and she and her new friend Evelyn find a sort of beautiful garden which has 3 ponds with water statues, a mermaid, a fairy and a witch. all are very beautiful…but the only one tht works was the mermaid.
they sort of get sucked in and it turns out to be the entrance to the mer land, and from the mer land you enter into the fairy land, and from the fairy land you enter into the wizarding land.
Ella finds out she was the daughter of a half mer half fairy lady, and a full wizard man. so shes all three races, fairy mer and witch. shes the only one in the whole world to be like this, so she immediately is wanted by the wizarding world, fairy world and mer world.
But, the wizarding world stopped communicating with the fairies a long time ago. there was a prophecy, tht when a 3 raced child is born, all three races will unite and be happy….
how can i make all three races have a war over Ella? should i change anything….what should the conflict be? the climax? helpp i have writers block

umm ok theres more, sorry you have to read so much.

Ellas mum had a relationship with a wizard (a hot one too) and the fairies hated it… would be shocked to see ellas mum with a baby.

so she took a potion to be a human for 2 hours and left the mer world and dropped the baby off at a ladies house.

im planning to reveal there identity after the peace comes back between the 3 races so ella can be with her parents happily again. ot should they be dead?

i want ella to live mainly in the fairy land.
ok then no war….but then what complication? i mean i dont want her to turn stuck up…no way thts not her personality. um…im really stuck. um…k maybe ill make her stuck up……and then make her realise tht shes not all tht, and then come back to her shy, kind uniqe personality.

Short Stories, Ghost Stories, Free Online Children’s Stories, Love Stories, Funny Kids Story

Thursday, February 11th, 2010

 

A good short story has withstood the test of time and remains as vital and relevant today as it was one hundred years ago.

 

Short story enables busy readers to “shop around” for storytellers with whom they may eventually enjoy longer relationships.

 

A short slice of life

So what do you do when you have to tell a fairy story, or love story and have to make it long enough to sustain your nephew’s interest but short enough to end before he falls asleep?

You find a story to tell.

If you remember enough of what you felt strongly about – recently or from a long time ago – you tell him that.

And do you remember those scary ghost stories grand-mom used to tell, bring them back in your recollection with the help of these children’s ghost story.

If, like most of us, you don’t, you fall back on short stories you cajoled out of parents and uncles and aunts and want to make them fresh short stories in today’s connotation.

The short story grew out of an increasing readership’s desire for shorter reading material.

 

It needs a skill to cultivate a short story from your recollected thoughts for course or arrangement of events. Even it is more challenging when you have to co-relate something what morals you need to convey thorough the story.

 

Now no worries, you have everything here what you would have imagined for; short stories, ghost story, love story, and basically you are in short love stories gallery.

 

Hey, are you looking for love making stories, if yes, you will find how a soldier is making love story in some frontier land.

 

We know our thoughts give meaning to our actions and they should be conveyed to Tom by these kid’s stories which fulfill the flair of funny short stories, isn’t it?

 

We are required to contact, welcome and log in any and all sentient races or multibeings in this quadrant of the Universe, without prejudice, fear or favor. So let’s join the voyage.

 

http://free-shortstories.com

Kontiki Radisson

‘Kontiki Radisson’ is a very prominent short story writer born in 28th June 1978 in Azamhola in Norway. Some of his stories- A soldier, ‘How dearly I Love you’ and many more emerged over the horizon of short story literature and praised universally. We are envy of him that he agreed to pen few gems’ for our website.

I read a long time ago a sci fi story about a man who was dying; he became younger and remembered things.?

Saturday, February 6th, 2010

Again, he was dying and this little fairy or angel or something (definitely female, as she was naked, but covered with a soft down); she had wings, etc. Anyway, she was there to help him remember. I cannot remember whether he had some sort of choice in the way he died; ie whether he could go fast or could linger (no pain), but he would remember his entire life, working backwards. It was a totally cool story; I think I read it in the early 80s or late 70s. Does ANYONE recognize this story? For sure, sci fi/fantasy; possibly by a famous writer such as Asimov (but NOT him). Thanks. And by the way…any story like this, tell me; I’m always looking for a great book/author!!

A long time ago: A fairy story

Wednesday, February 3rd, 2010

A long time ago: A fairy story