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How do you like my story plot? help last bit?

Monday, February 22nd, 2010

ok. here goes, i hope you like it.

Ella moves from the city to the coast, and she finds the coast very relaxing and she strangely feels at home. she lives a normal life with her mum,(who looks nothing like her) and her dad died before she was born.
she goes to school and she and her new friend Evelyn find a sort of beautiful garden which has 3 ponds with water statues, a mermaid, a fairy and a witch. all are very beautiful…but the only one tht works was the mermaid.
they sort of get sucked in and it turns out to be the entrance to the mer land, and from the mer land you enter into the fairy land, and from the fairy land you enter into the wizarding land.
Ella finds out she was the daughter of a half mer half fairy lady, and a full wizard man. so shes all three races, fairy mer and witch. shes the only one in the whole world to be like this, so she immediately is wanted by the wizarding world, fairy world and mer world.
But, the wizarding world stopped communicating with the fairies a long time ago. there was a prophecy, tht when a 3 raced child is born, all three races will unite and be happy….
how can i make all three races have a war over Ella? should i change anything….what should the conflict be? the climax? helpp i have writers block
umm ok theres more, sorry you have to read so much.

Ellas mum had a relationship with a wizard (a hot one too) and the fairies hated it… would be shocked to see ellas mum with a baby.

so she took a potion to be a human for 2 hours and left the mer world and dropped the baby off at a ladies house.

im planning to reveal there identity after the peace comes back between the 3 races so ella can be with her parents happily again. ot should they be dead?

i want ella to live mainly in the fairy land.
ok then no war….but then what complication? i mean i dont want her to turn stuck up…no way thts not her personality. um…im really stuck. um…k maybe ill make her stuck up……and then make her realise tht shes not all tht, and then come back to her shy, kind uniqe personality.

Story plot? ratings please, help with last bit?

Saturday, February 20th, 2010

ok. here goes, i hope you like it.

Ella moves from the city to the coast, and she finds the coast very relaxing and she strangely feels at home. she lives a normal life with her mum,(who looks nothing like her) and her dad died before she was born.
she goes to school and she and her new friend Evelyn find a sort of beautiful garden which has 3 ponds with water statues, a mermaid, a fairy and a witch. all are very beautiful…but the only one tht works was the mermaid.
they sort of get sucked in and it turns out to be the entrance to the mer land, and from the mer land you enter into the fairy land, and from the fairy land you enter into the wizarding land.
Ella finds out she was the daughter of a half mer half fairy lady, and a full wizard man. so shes all three races, fairy mer and witch. shes the only one in the whole world to be like this, so she immediately is wanted by the wizarding world, fairy world and mer world.
But, the wizarding world stopped communicating with the fairies a long time ago. there was a prophecy, tht when a 3 raced child is born, all three races will unite and be happy….
how can i make all three races have a war over Ella? should i change anything….what should the conflict be? the climax? helpp i have writers block

umm ok theres more, sorry you have to read so much.

Ellas mum had a relationship with a wizard (a hot one too) and the fairies hated it… would be shocked to see ellas mum with a baby.

so she took a potion to be a human for 2 hours and left the mer world and dropped the baby off at a ladies house.

im planning to reveal there identity after the peace comes back between the 3 races so ella can be with her parents happily again. ot should they be dead?

i want ella to live mainly in the fairy land.
ok then no war….but then what complication? i mean i dont want her to turn stuck up…no way thts not her personality. um…im really stuck. um…k maybe ill make her stuck up……and then make her realise tht shes not all tht, and then come back to her shy, kind uniqe personality.

I am looking for a book I read a long time ago. I don’t remember the name or author. It was about fairies.

Monday, February 8th, 2010

A little girl met a man named michael and he told her a story about goblins and fairies. it was a love story as well.